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Grades level iconsGrades 9–12
Genre information iconPoetry
Resource type iconWriting

Am I a Concrete Rose?

Alphonsine M., 826LA
A student reflects on the journey and struggle of growing in the face of adversity.
About the Author

Alphonsine M. attends Venice High School in Los Angeles, California. Their piece was first published in Our Voices Matter: A Collection of Journeys and Dreams, a collaboration between 826LA and Los Angeles Unified School District’s Black Student Achievement Plan. You can read the full digital publication and learn more about the project here.

Am I a Concrete Rose?

Am I a Concrete Rose?

Am I a concrete rose…
The many hands and scissors
I must dodge day by day
The many fake smiles that
Approach me every day with
Their wicked intentions written on
Their teeth… am I a concrete rose…
The manual says put your hands together
And bow your head then proceed to spill
Your heart
I did that… but… why is there
Still rain, thunder, tornados on my side
Tupac, how did you grow legs and walk
Away
I’m tired
I’m tired of hearing the same encouraging words “you’re close to the finishing line…”
When will I finally cross it
The manual said you hear prayers from even under the ocean
I’m above water and still my prayers aren’t answered
Do you need me to be swallowed by a fish…?
Will you hear me then
Must I become Jonah…
Will you hear me then
I scroll and scroll and scroll
But no one to relate to
Everyone god has answered
But me…
Why am I last
Is my story ever going to have
A happily ever after…
Or am I just being delulu
When is my hour of happiness
Going to arrive… am I a concrete
Rose… Tupac … you there ? … good night then … RIP

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