Students will learn how to revise a draft of a personal narrative using five writers’ moves. They will also gain a greater understanding of the golden rule of writing: “show, don’t tell.”
Your students will use one revision strategy (“writers’ move”) to begin revising their personal essay.
Personal narratives are special pieces of writing because they tell a story from your unique perspective. The writing can always be improved by employing the golden rule of writing: show, don’t tell. As a reminder:
STEP 1
To begin, test students’ skills in recognizing when details are being shown versus told. On pages 1-8 of the The Golden Rule— Handout, you’ll find example sentences and a prompt that asks students to figure out whether the text is showing or telling. Pages 1, 3, 5, and 7 have the questions, and pages 2, 4, 6, and 8 have the answers and follow-up questions. With each example, ask for a volunteer to read the text. Then,...
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