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Grades level iconsGrades 9–12
Genre information iconNarrative
Resource type iconSparks

Writers’ Moves and the Golden Rule

by the Programs Team at 826 Boston
Writers have the power to make choices about the words and structures they use in their writing. In this Spark, students will learn how to wield that power with purpose.
What Your Students Will Learn

Students will learn how to revise a draft of a personal narrative using five writers’ moves. They will also gain a greater understanding of the golden rule of writing: “show, don’t tell.”

What Your Students Will Produce

 Your students will use one revision strategy (“writers’ move”) to begin revising their personal essay.

What You Will Do

Personal narratives are special pieces of writing because they tell a story from your unique perspective. The writing  can always be improved by employing the golden rule of writing: show, don’t tell. As a reminder: 

  • Showing is when a writer provides details—such as examples, imagery, and action— that help a reader experience the story. 
  • Telling is when a writer summarizes what’s happening without any additional details or context.

STEP 1

To begin, test students’ skills in recognizing when details are being shown versus told. On pages 1-8 of the The Golden Rule— Handout, you’ll find example sentences and a prompt that asks students to figure out whether the text is showing or telling. Pages 1, 3, 5, and 7 have the questions, and pages 2, 4, 6, and 8 have the answers and follow-up questions. With each example, ask for a volunteer to read the text. Then,...

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