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Grades level iconsGrades 3–6
Genre information iconPoetry
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Odes to Ordinary Objects

by Ashley Smith, 826 Valencia
Students will find gratitude all around as they thank ordinary objects in their lives in the form of an ode.
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What Your Students Will Learn

In this activity, students learn key components of odes, practice using descriptive writing techniques like personification and simile, and craft an ode to an ordinary object of their choosing.

Common Core Standards
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.3.4 Common Core Standards Icon
With guidance and support from adults, produce writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task and purpose. (Grade-specific expectations for writing types are defined in standards 1-3 above.)
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.3.5 Common Core Standards Icon
With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing. (Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of Language standards 1-3 up to and including grade 3 here.)
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.3.10 Common Core Standards Icon
Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.3.D Common Core Standards Icon
Use concrete words and phrases and sensory details to convey experiences and events precisely.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.4 Common Core Standards Icon
Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. (Grade-specific expectations for writing types are defined in standards 1-3 above.)
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.5 Common Core Standards Icon
With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing. (Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of Language standards 1-3 up to and including grade 4 here.)
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.4.10 Common Core Standards Icon
Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.5.3.D Common Core Standards Icon
Use concrete words and phrases and sensory details to convey experiences and events precisely.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.5.4 Common Core Standards Icon
Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.5.5 Common Core Standards Icon
With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.5.10 Common Core Standards Icon
Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.3.D Common Core Standards Icon
Use precise words and phrases, relevant descriptive details, and sensory language to convey experiences and events.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.4 Common Core Standards Icon
Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.5 Common Core Standards Icon
With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.10 Common Core Standards Icon
Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences.
What Your Students Will Produce

Students write odes to an ordinary object of their choosing.

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Session 1 :
How To Begin

Begin with a class reading of the example ode on the “Odes to Ordinary Objects” handout. As students read an example of an ode to an ordinary object, they can highlight and note key elements from the poem on the same handout.

Ask students:

  • What can you picture in your mind when you read this?
  • What is surprising about this poem?
  • How does the author give thanks to this object?
  • What do you notice about who the poem is speaking to?
  • Are any lines repeated?
  • What images are particularly strong?
  • How does the poet use the 5 senses?
  • What can you picture smelling, touching, seeing, tasting, hearing, or feeling when you hear this?

STEP 1

From here, have students choose an ordinary object to focus on in an ode of their own. To help students choose an object from their everyday life, ask:

  • What do they think is an underappreciated object?
  • What is something they use every day and take for granted?
  • How could they thank this object?
  • How does it help them in their everyday life?
  • How could they describe this object?
  • Can they use their 5 senses to describe it?

Once students have chosen an object, they should brainstorm ideas and do some preliminary planning using the second portion of the “Odes to Ordinary Objects” handout.

STEP 2

Time for drafting! Students then write a draft of an ode to their object. Students’ odes should have at least 4 stanzas, with 4 lines in each stanza. Remind students that an ode should thank the object, and encourage students to be as specific and descriptive as possible, employing all 5 senses to describe the sights, sounds, textures, smells, and even tastes, of their chosen object.

Next, review the definition of personification (giving human characteristics to nonhuman objects). Ask your students:

  • What is something that humans can do that your object doesn’t do?
  • How could we pretend this object was a person?
  • What might this object do if it was human?
  • Could it wear clothes?
  • Could it say something?
  • How would it move?
  • How would it feel?
  • What more information can you give your reader by making a comparison?  

As an additional challenge, have students review the definition of similes (comparisons using “like” or “as”).

Students will practice writing examples of personification and similes for their ordinary objects using their “Revision and Editing” handout.

Students should add 3-5 different lines to their odes using their examples of similes and personification, or other descriptive details they can come up with. Some questions to help students come up with other descriptive details include:

  • Can you give more details about this item?
  • What can you compare this to?
  • Is it as loud as something?
  • Bright as something?
  • Quiet like what?
  • Are there nouns that could be more precise (for example, pirate versus man)?
  • Can you add adjectives?
  • Can you use more active verbs?
  • Can you picture what is happening throughout your piece?
  • Where can we add more details?

STEP 3

Conclusion

Students should share their odes to ordinary objects if time allows. If they finish early, students can publish another ode, decorate their ode, or practice reading their ode aloud before sharing.

Gratitude can be everywhere!

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